Firstly: Happy New Year!
When I moved out of the Buddhist community I was living in I made a promise to start collecting my own small stones, but it’s taken this project, and the momentum of a nearly two hundred other people writing to get me going. I’ve written a few pre-January stones at another small stone.
Haiku gone wrong?
Seeing someone writing that a small stone looked like “Haiku gone wrong” prompted this post.
A small stone might be a haiku, but it might not be. We’re not asking for you to write in any form. What we’re asking for is for you to look, and listen and taste and feel with all your attention, and then to put this into words. A tight form can help with this: T.S. Eliot talked about how having a good fixed structure can help reveal a deeper truth as your creativity is confined by the form.
But good haiku is difficult. The form has its own desires and sympathies, and it might not be the best way to describe the stone you have picked up. Perhaps a tanka might be better. I’ve written truly awful examples of both.
I’m not even sure a small stone is a poem. “What a poem is” is beyond the scope of this post (and beyond me).
Sometimes a small stone is just a few words that points to the moment, like this example by Mop from Poésie minimaliste – Minimalist poetry
Five sparrows in the water.
Sometimes a small stone points to something seen inside a person, or felt about a person, like this stone by Rose Mary Boehm from Coming Up For Air
They bought her a puppy
when what she needed
was her mum and a ride
across the far side
of the moon.
No one is sitting here judging. Whilst we are encouraging you to really look, and listen and feel, take the chance to play a little with words as well. When you have your moment in mind, try capturing it just as a few words, or a couple of longer sentences or as a haiku and see what difference it makes.
For more about what a small stone is, and how to polish them, have a look at this article Fiona wrote a little while ago: Writing your own small stones
Feel free to ignore all of this advice 😉 We hope that you are enjoying the writing, and discovering new things about the world around you.